Monday, November 4, 2013

Outline for Caesar Essay

Prompt: Which speech was more effective/ persuasive. Use text evidence and analysis to support your thesis.

Intro: Brief explanation of Julius Caesar and why two men gave speeches at his funeral.
End the first paragraph with your thesis statement: The answer and the why: My example is below. Use your NNE charts to create your own.


Julius Caesar has been known throughout history as one of Rome’s most effective rulers. In Shakespeare’s play, Julius Caesar was murdered by his “trusted friends” and Senators, as many of them thought they were stopping a “tyrant” from taking over Rome. At his funeral, both Brutus and Antony gave speeches to try to convince the Roman people of their causes. Brutus tried to show the crowd that what he and the Senators did was in their best interests, while Antony refuted that wholeheartedly. Though Brutus gave a convincing speech at Caesar’s funeral, it was Antony who proved to be more persuasive in his cause by appealing to both emotion and logic, a clever use of sarcasm, and by using Brutus’ own words against him.

1st Body Paragraph: Discuss his use of emotion and logic. Use text evidence showing examples of both. Elaborate and explain his message.

2nd Body Paragraph: Discuss his use of sarcasm. Text evidence and explain.

3rd Body paragraph: Talk about what Brutus did well, (use text evidence) then show how Antony did a better job of using Brutus’ words against him. Use text evidence and explain.


Conclusion: Final thoughts and any remaining evidence.

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